I like this poem...It's good!

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People come in and out of your life...But I'm a one you'll never forget!


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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!


^^ Awesome, awesome, awesome!!



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Dream forever

I was walking trough the garden

Honey that garden's been walked through so many times I'm surprised the grass still grows straight.

Thinking that something's wrong

The only thing wrong is I'm not beside you

Only feeling chilly wind, rain
And not singing out the song

Our song?

Of the path I'm walking on



I would rather reverse time
Scream, go back and pause again
To your hands, your lips, your kiss,
First time, second, and then
Keep on repeating it again

This one's my favorite. I don't know why - just maybe the way it twists the mind
and forces your thoughts to comply because the words say it's so.

Oh, the gardens are now empty
Like my inky blood-stained heart
Though it owns a piece of yours too

Binary unto thee forevermore.

But when will the beating start
At the time of my depart


My eyes will only open
To the sunrays of your soul
When your arms and wings embrace me
When entangled as a whole

I won't let go. Never again.

Breath is out of our control

Ah memories ... wasn't it, though? So out of control. (Especially yours, haha.)


Ying and yang do not fit me
Though you fill me up as one
Never will you be for granted
So put down your rusty gun
And together we will run

What are we running from darling ?


Though the skies have turned so grey now
Our strong wings will carry high
Falling is not an option
And the winds roar a cry
To your dreamy-eyed sigh

The silly princess-like fainty sigh ?
I'll do that one again since it always makes you smile.


I shall remain your King, love
Even on a different land

And I your warrior princess waiting for your galant return.

Waiting with the ticking clock
For the flight, that is planned
And will love you, to the end




As I told you before - this amazed me when I read it on LJ. I was completely in awe. I had no idea what to say. It's 11:48 right now and I'm going to BED and I still don't know if this is enough. I'm really ... you just ... I hope my favorite and these simple words at least amount to enough of an explanation as to how much I love this piece.

...
We need to set a date and start counting down. And set up an account as soon as humanly possible.

Let's do this baby.







Damn ... I love you.




~ I.

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I would know you.

that's so sweet :`( :: don't limit yourself to such strict rhyming though! you've got a great poem here, but i can't help but feel that it's... limited by the rhyme scheme >.<

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"...or maybe she was eat by giant bunny! She tried to run, but it could hop." -Tovar, The Strangerhood

you've been tampon tagged , ha ha!

Thank you for the kind comment ^^

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My Princess
*InnoTenshi

This is how most of my poems should be. But unfortunately I don't always get into that flow to write....

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My Princess
*InnoTenshi

This poem came naturally. The first two verses came in that rhyming style out of nowhere. And since I was in a good writing flow, I kept to that scheme.
I know it my seems I'm limiting myself, but this was the best way it was coming out on paper. I mean, I wrote it all in one piece, it kept coming in that way.

If I disturb the flow to make it seem like a less regular poem.... then I wouldn't have even been able to finish the poem.


And I like to keep to quite regular rhyming schemes anyways. Guess I'm a bit of a traditional poet

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My Princess
*InnoTenshi

*can't spell*

I know it may seem


Gah!

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My Princess
*InnoTenshi

The garden is well tended to, no worries about the grass. And I mostly walk on the path anyways.

Our song, or maybe The Path by HIM? I though that was quite obvious (seeing the sentence after that)

What are we running from? The limitations here in the physical realm. Our parents, our families, our obligations. Anything that keeps us from being free together.




As soon as I know my vacation dates from school I think we can set a date. And how about we work on the site a bit today? Hm?

Then I'll also have a look into those PayPal accounts.



We can do it.







King

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My Princess
*InnoTenshi